Misspelling, grammatical stuff.

Laufen

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Not trying to be nit picky. Just thought you'd want it to be correct.

1. Enthusiasts - And there's no need for a period since it's not a complete sentence. You could change it to "We are a community of freedom loving outdoor enthusiasts." If you wanted to make a complete sentence and keep the period. It doesn't matter though.

Sentence three (just some changes that make it sound more inviting and make it flow better:

We're white collar, and blue collar. We're from various backgrounds, and we all believe in the freedoms that are insured by out Constitution.

Also, the picture doesn't very well reflect the above statement.


Anyway, that's all.
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Not trying to be nit picky. Just thought you'd want it to be correct.

1. Enthusiasts - And there's no need for a period since it's not a complete sentence. You could change it to "We are a community of freedom loving outdoor enthusiasts." If you wanted to make a complete sentence and keep the period. It doesn't matter though.

Sentence three (just some changes that make it sound more inviting and make it flow better:

We're white collar, and blue collar. We're from various backgrounds, and we all believe in the freedoms that are insured by out Constitution.

Also, the picture doesn't very well reflect the above statement.


Anyway, that's all.
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scand

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I wholeheartedly agree with @Laufen . Your grammar is a representation of yourself. In the internet world, it's often the only thing people ever see of you.