Misspelling, grammatical stuff.

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Not trying to be nit picky. Just thought you'd want it to be correct.

1. Enthusiasts - And there's no need for a period since it's not a complete sentence. You could change it to "We are a community of freedom loving outdoor enthusiasts." If you wanted to make a complete sentence and keep the period. It doesn't matter though.

Sentence three (just some changes that make it sound more inviting and make it flow better:

We're white collar, and blue collar. We're from various backgrounds, and we all believe in the freedoms that are insured by out Constitution.

Also, the picture doesn't very well reflect the above statement.


Anyway, that's all.
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Not trying to be nit picky. Just thought you'd want it to be correct.

1. Enthusiasts - And there's no need for a period since it's not a complete sentence. You could change it to "We are a community of freedom loving outdoor enthusiasts." If you wanted to make a complete sentence and keep the period. It doesn't matter though.

Sentence three (just some changes that make it sound more inviting and make it flow better:

We're white collar, and blue collar. We're from various backgrounds, and we all believe in the freedoms that are insured by out Constitution.

Also, the picture doesn't very well reflect the above statement.


Anyway, that's all.
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I wholeheartedly agree with @Laufen . Your grammar is a representation of yourself. In the internet world, it's often the only thing people ever see of you.
 

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Wait, what was the question again?
 

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How long has that been up and if it's so important why didn't y'all say anything until now?
I was looking for the “become a supporter” section and happened to read it. Also the importance of proper spelling and grammar isn’t contingent on how quickly people can spot mistakes.
 
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Not trying to be nit picky. Just thought you'd want it to be correct.

1. Enthusiasts - And there's no need for a period since it's not a complete sentence. You could change it to "We are a community of freedom loving outdoor enthusiasts." If you wanted to make a complete sentence and keep the period. It doesn't matter though.

Sentence three (just some changes that make it sound more inviting and make it flow better:

We're white collar, and blue collar. We're from various backgrounds, and we all believe in the freedoms that are insured by out Constitution.

Also, the picture doesn't very well reflect the above statement.


Anyway, that's all.
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Changed to your suggested improvements.... however provide me with a better image that does represent the community and who we are and I'll use it.
 

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There probably isn’t one, but I was thinking more along the lines of using an image of who you would like us to become.
 
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Giving each other handjobs doesn't make us gay. There's nothing emotional involved it's just part of our barter system.
People have attempted and achieved eye contact so.............